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Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Spoken Word


**Warning** this poem may not be for the faint of heart or overly old.



Do you know the pain,
of a razor on the vein,
The wish to die alone,
or sound of breaking bone,
What it means to live a lie,
or to hear a loved girl cry,
I send them all my best,
for soon I join the rest.

Eric Lee Archer
September 2006
©2006-2008 ~Celtic-Lemniscate
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The title says more then enough for this one...
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~Lynnzo:iconLynnzo: Sep 27, 2006, 11:10:24 PM
I am going to stay away from personal comments on this and just say that I love the poem.
~Celtic-Lemniscate:iconCeltic-Lemniscate: Sep 28, 2006, 12:07:12 AM
Thank you.

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Life comes at you fast so be prepared to block the blows it will send your way.
~stevenseitz450:iconstevenseitz450: Oct 9, 2006, 12:29:21 AM
yes i do know the feeling of the blade down my vein i feel the sme way
~Celtic-Lemniscate:iconCeltic-Lemniscate: Oct 22, 2006, 5:41:28 PM
Thank you for the fav, and for the flowers.

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Life comes at you fast so be prepared to block the blows it will send your way.
~malikamustang:iconmalikamustang: Nov 10, 2007, 1:43:21 AM
May I hug you?

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Cui ci sono dei mostri.

\"If you want to bed a woman, do it in the bedroom. If you want to seduce her, do it in the dance.\"
-Daemon Sadi

\"If it didn\'t hurt so much, I\'d laugh harder.\"
~rheill

Go here: [link]
~Celtic-Lemniscate:iconCeltic-Lemniscate: Nov 10, 2007, 1:39:56 PM
Don't worry that was a few years ago, my Freshman year to be correct. Few things make me think like that anymore, lets just say I was more emo then all of the emo at Service combined. It was a blast though, tight clothing and dark outlooks on life. But once again those years have past and I have no feelings of wanting them back.

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Life comes at you fast so be prepared to block the blows it will send your way.
~malikamustang:iconmalikamustang: Nov 10, 2007, 10:37:41 PM
but...may I hug you anyway?

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Cui ci sono dei mostri.

\"If you want to bed a woman, do it in the bedroom. If you want to seduce her, do it in the dance.\"
-Daemon Sadi

\"If it didn\'t hurt so much, I\'d laugh harder.\"
~rheill

Go here: [link]
~Celtic-Lemniscate:iconCeltic-Lemniscate: Nov 10, 2007, 11:06:33 PM
Nah, don't need it.

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Life comes at you fast so be prepared to block the blows it will send your way.
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